Example of Hortatory with the Analyze

Crime In Cities

            Crime is a serious problem in big cities and it is getting worse every year. This is what the police departments around the country said in their reports last week. The subways are more dangerous. The streets are more dangerous. You may not  even be safe in your own home. Why the problem is so serious now? This is not an easy a question to answer. There are may not be a single answer. Many problems seem to make cities so dangerous.

            One of the problem is money. To fight crime a city needs police officers, cars and gun. These are cost by a lot of money. But right now cities do not have much extra money. So, there are not enough police officer, cars and guns for the cities.

              Another problem is drugs. Crime studies show that many criminals use and sell drugs. After they start taking drugs, they want to have more. However, drugs are very expensive. So, these people may sell to other people to make money or they may steal money to get more drugs.

            There is an even more important cause of crime. Cities have rich and poor neighborhoods. In the poor, neighborhoods, jobs are hard to find. Many young people don’t have much hope for a better life. They only know one way to make better living for themselves. That way to sell drugs or steal. So, some of this young people become criminals.

It is not going to be easy to change these crime problems. We must first changes many of the laws about drugs. We must change the way cities spend their money. Until the crime problem will not go away and we will live in far.

 

A. Social Function :

            To persuade the readers or listeners that something should or should not be the case

Generic Structure	Crime In Cities
Thesis (announcement of issue concern)	Crime is a serious problem in big cities and it is getting worse every year. This is what the police departments around the country said in their reports last week. The subways are more dangerous. The streets are more dangerous. You may not  even be safe in your own home. Why the problem is so serious now? This is not an easy a question to answer. There are may not be a single answer. Many problems seem to make cities so dangerous.
Argumentation (Reasons for concern that lead to recommendation)	One of the problem is money. To fight crime a city needs police officers, cars and gun. These are cost by a lot of money. But right now cities do not have much extra money. So, there are not enough police officer, cars and guns for the cities.               Another problem is drugs. Crime studies show that many criminals use and sell drugs. After they start taking drugs, they want to have more. However, drugs are very expensive. So, these people may sell to other people to make money or they may steal money to get more drugs.             There is an even more important cause of crime. Cities have rich and poor neighborhoods. In the poor, neighborhoods, jobs are hard to find. Many young people don’t have much hope for a better life. They only know one way to make better living for themselves. That way to sell drugs or steal. So, some of this young people become criminals.
Recommendation (statement of what ought or ought not to happen.	It is not going to be easy to change these crime problems. We must first changes many of the laws about drugs. We must change the way cities spend their money. Until the crime problem will not go away and we will live in far.

B. Generic Stucture

C. Language Features :

1. Using Present Tense:

-           Crime is a serious problem in big cities and it is getting worse every year. (line 1 par 1)

-           The subways are more dangerous. The streets are more dangerous. (Line 2 and 3 par 1)

-           Many problems seem to make cities so dangerous. (Line 8 par 1)
-           One of the problem is money.(line 1 par 2)

-           These are cost by a lot of money. But right now cities do not have much extra money. So, there are not enough police officer, cars and guns for the cities.(line 3,4 and 5 par 2)

-           Another problem is drugs. Crime studies show that many criminals use and sell drugs. ( line 1 and 2 par 3)

-           However, drugs are very expensive. ( line 4 par 3)

-           There is an even more important cause of crime. Cities have rich and poor neighborhoods. In the poor, neighborhoods, jobs are hard to find. Many young people don’t have much hope for a better life. (line 1,2,3 and 4 par 4)

-           So, some of this young people become criminals. (line 7 par 4)

 

2. Use Action Verb

-           Crime is a serious problem in big cities and it is getting worse every year.(line par 1)

-           After they start taking drugs, they want to have more. (line 2 par 3)

-           They only know one way to make better living for themselves. That way to sell drugs or steal. (line 5 and 6 par 4)

-           It is not going to be easy to change these crime problems. (line 1 par 5)

3. Use Thinking verb :

-           Why the problem is so serious now? ( line 6 par 1)

-           However, drugs are very expensive. (line 4 par 3)

 

4. Use passive sentence:

           

-           These are cost by a lot of money. (line 3 par 2)

 

5. Use Modals (may, must, can, could, might, etc) :

-           There are may not be a single answer. (line 8 par 1)

-           We must first changes many of the laws about drugs. We must change the way cities spend their money. ( line 2 and 3 par 5 )